Hairography

Wacky yet simple, strange yet unique, this describes my personality. I get in lots of knots and tangles but face every single obstacle. Bit by bit, piece by piece, and soon enough I'm not in pain and in a tangle. I'm very thin and am a light color pinch of blond. Every day brings something new. Either twisted, straight, in a knot, or even frizzy. But for most of the time It's PERFECT! That's what I enjoy about myself.

The voice sounds like she is trying to become fixed. It also sounds like she wants to be perfect and wants to be fixed so that everyone can see how pretty she is.

The word choice is okay. It may need some more entertaining words to fill in other plain words such as, Like and Lots. Your word choice isn't bad though.

Need to use more figurative language. Similes, metaphors, and personification.

The author seems like she enjoys her hair and she also seems like she is determined to fix her hair.